I really loved this story. The good thing about Medium for writers like us is that you need to take what you write and simplify it for a 9th grader.This requires great skill. As for the details of communication I know any skilled writer would have a great time reading this story. The key, I believe, is to make sure that the idea isn’t lost but is more understandable by the person that's reading it even if they are 5 year old. Great work.
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